I really enjoy this! The distorted 8-bitish sounds you use really fit with the message you're trying to get across.
Dude, if you can make stuff as good as this, you really shouldn't get discouraged. Of course, don't procrastinate schoolwork (and that's coming from me, a master procrastinator), but if you go on and trust in yourself, you'll get somewhere!
BTW English is not my native language so sorry for any grammar mistakes.
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